tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post2003575627330619428..comments2013-05-28T07:07:45.500-07:00Comments on Dom's NEW blog: To kill a mockingbirdAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10481260262674939917noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-45545371109214893742013-05-28T07:07:45.500-07:002013-05-28T07:07:45.500-07:001. Introduction is well done.
2. i liked the first...1. Introduction is well done.<br />2. i liked the first quote.<br />3. the story was well organized.<br />4. the punctuation was a little problem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07470955115245475577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-49758304346338804422013-05-28T07:07:39.111-07:002013-05-28T07:07:39.111-07:001.) I think your intro really drags the reader in ...1.) I think your intro really drags the reader in and helps the reader connect to it.<br /><br />2.) The first quote really backs up your thesis. So that one was the best.<br /><br />3.) It flowed well unlike other people essays where I couldn't understand it.<br /><br />4.) Punctuation. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04674406826847085111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-45552640891307952862013-05-28T06:04:11.378-07:002013-05-28T06:04:11.378-07:001.starts with a good intro
2. the last quote was ...1.starts with a good intro<br /><br />2. the last quote was the best<br /><br />3. i liked the layout of the story<br /><br />4. the last paragraph is spaced differently than the restQUINTON BEASTLY BLOGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18179541709518503953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-52164254652869180822013-05-27T15:22:28.155-07:002013-05-27T15:22:28.155-07:001. the thesis of this essay decisions are made by ...1. the thesis of this essay decisions are made by everybody, and how they make them.<br />2.The first quote was my favorite because it really supported what you were trying to say. <br />3. i liked how easy the quotes were able to be understood.<br />4. Probably punctuation Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17892026804377493658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-48578640931617994592013-05-24T07:27:02.490-07:002013-05-24T07:27:02.490-07:001) It`s like the same beginning as mine, both desc...1) It`s like the same beginning as mine, both describing decisions of Bob Ewell.<br />2) The last one describes how Bob lied about the big rape problem.<br />3) Explaining why you chose the quotes you did.<br />4) Punctuation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15720719677684714059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-585305380587479382013-05-24T07:13:00.835-07:002013-05-24T07:13:00.835-07:001. This essay is about the decisions in life which...1. This essay is about the decisions in life which is also the thesis. I like how you tied in real life situations.<br /><br />2. I like the first quote because it shows how certain decisions can affect you in society.<br /><br />3. I like how well your essay is organized. The quotes are easy to understand and follow.<br /><br />4. you should go back and check punctuation. Other than that it was good !Maritza Romanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08558244325346650380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-31095475449315499222013-05-24T07:12:55.105-07:002013-05-24T07:12:55.105-07:001. The message of the essay was that many decision...1. The message of the essay was that many decisions are made everyday and people handle them in different ways. <br />2.The first quote was my favorite because it really supported what you were trying to say. <br />3. i liked how you started the essay it was very strong. I could see what you were about to tell us as readers. <br />4. check for punctuation. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04197254282083983949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-888988192480271602.post-56646071413132709142013-05-24T06:10:19.877-07:002013-05-24T06:10:19.877-07:001. The thesis of this essay is "There are man...1. The thesis of this essay is "There are many decisions being made everyday for many different things." The essay begins with examples of how people make decisions in their lives.<br />2. "Everyone in the courtroom will be racist against Tom and believe Bob because he is a white man." I thought this example was the best because it shows that the people in courtroom were almost all racist and that a fair decision would not be made on whether Tom hurt Mayella.<br />3. I liked the conclusion to your essay. I thought it did a really good job summing up everything that you talked about.<br />4. No suggestions.Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03624474641911736778noreply@blogger.com